February Poetry Blog

In the poem “Evaporate”, by Sarah Kay, she speaks upon her present self talking about how fast time is moving and reflects on how rapidly she has grown up, along with the significance in which her life has changed over the years. These sudden realizations were caused by her interactions with a little girl, in the sixth grade that she met. In the poem, Kay felt that she had lost control of life, and felt that the girl initially saw her as a grey cloud. This was shown in the sixth stanza, when she said, “It sounded like she said she wasn’t the sick grey which made me think that is what she thought I was.” 

The overarching theme of “Evaporate” by Sarah Kay is that she was entirely engulfed in sadness, simply due to her loss of control of time and how it has made her feel as if time has flown by. This powerful poem can be easily related to the song “Never Grow Up” By Taylor Swift. In this song, Swift also describes the sensation of growing up and missing her younger experiences. For example, a lyric she often repeats is “I wish I’d never grown up”. This line clearly demonstrates upset feelings in regards to looking back on her childhood and the things that would come with it. One representation of her missing parts of her childhood is, “You’re in the car on the way to the movies and you’re mortified your mom’s droppin’ you off”. This shows she was nervous, when she was younger,  which relates to Kay’s poem as they were eager to grow up, but looking back on it, they wished they had taken things slower. 

In conclusion, Sarah Kay’s poem expresses her opinions on how fast time moves as you grow up. She describes the time leaving like it is “evaporating” away from her, just as water evaporates into the invisible air. This is similar to Taylor Swift’s song, which is about the thoughts that come across your mind when you become an adult. Both of these convey a theme of feeling melancholy about growing up and reflecting on your childhood. Additionally, they both come from a woman’s point of view which gives a relatable feeling to a lot of young adult women reading and listening, who probably relate. This powerful feeling gained by readers can be shown in the poem, where Sarah Kay encounters a young girl that really makes her realize how grown up she is. “Never Grow Up” is in second person and is talking all about a little girl and following her as she goes through childhood. Taylor Swift also talks to her younger self, saying, “Don’t you ever grow up. Just stay this little”, while Kay says she is “watching parts of me evaporate”. They are both watching back on their lives, and their lives when they were younger, and reflecting on how they got to where they are now. 

Violet’s October Blog

I read the “Love Poem #137” by Sarah Kay. I really liked this poem. I have not read much poetry other than  in school and most recently, only Clint Smith. Smith’s poems are all melancholy, but this poem was refreshingly happy.  Reading this poem made me smile. The poem is written to her love interest as she is telling him how she is going to care for him during their relationship. She also talks about herself and describes negative parts of her personality and how her partner will compliment her. I liked this realism and the way she gave specific examples in a creative, witty way.  While she can say good things she brings to the relationship, she also can admit the bad things.

For example she says:

“I can’t do a pull-up. 

But I’m great at excuses”

She shows the realistic side of relationships that aren’t usually shown in literature, including novels and poems.  And definitely not in social media where you only see couples holding hands and smiling. As I am starting my first relationship, I liked the way she set expectations for her partner. I think this is the best thing you can do for a blooming relationship.  Again, she does it in a funny, imaginative way.

She tells him:

“My hair in the shower drain,

my smell on your sweaters, 

bobby pins all over the window sills.”

She also expresses her love for him with unexpected examples which I found really impressive.  She explains:

“I will leave pennies in your pockets

postage stamps of superheroes 

in between the pages of your books

sugar packets in your counters”

My favorite line in the poem is definitely:

“I will love you with too many commas

but never any asterisks”

To me this means that she has so many adjectives to describe her love interest that she would have “too many commas” but she would not have asterisks which are used in negatively charged curse words. I think the comma part was such a clever use of symbolism for having a lot of good things to say about a person. It is a reminder that when you love a person, the words to describe them flow freely.

I also liked how the poem ended with “No, trust me. You don’t want to miss a thing.” 

It leaves the readers with optimism and curiosity about how their relationship will grow because it is talking about the future and the good things to come. This spoke to me because as I am starting my first relationship, I am very anxious for the future, but I shouldn’t be. I should be excited and hopeful. To me, this poem shows the very real sides of relationships and how every person involved needs to collaborate to make it the best it can be. Not just dating relationships, but also friendships. It encourages readers to work together to overcome challenges with each other. 

Overall, I was drawn to the theme of realism and it inspired me to really appreciate my relationships and enjoy the good and bad that I bring to them, just like Kay is doing in the poem. The poem encouraged me to see the positivity in my relationships whether that is with my boyfriend, friends, or family members.